The edge of impatient lover's love (a reminisce)

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Open Poetry #27

The edge of impatient lover's love (a reminisce)

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

0 posted 2003-07-16 08:10 PM

Placed in a cube of impatient suspense,
all around me she is like a sweet scent,
that places my mind into a spiral of longing to know her more.

Never could she please me the way my lord can,
but this void in my flesh could be overflowing with her
and I would not mind.

Can't sleep and long to love her.
Long for her love and the taste of her touch.
It would be as I'm doused with golden honey and it seeping into my pores with a deliciousness savored over every ounce of me.
She is where she is and I am here,
In this prison of a body that slaves these emotions for her.

My interest in her,
though she is gone,
excels when I think of her eyes and my eyes
engaged
in a holy gaze that binds us with the love of Jesus.
Then I think of our hands,
palm to palm,
fingers intwined,
while she speaks the words of an earthly goddess that could loll me with just a syllable.

I drink of the holy spirit and hope to pour myself into her.
To grow,
to love,
to hug,
to kiss,
to live and cherish this gift of life with her.

I feel like I'm floating on a cool gentle breeze.
My heart grasping a heavy mist of droplets,
each particle filled with a joy,
love,
and sadness without her.
The things I hear like a clear static full of her notion and energy I yearn and need like a cure to this poison that the distance feeds me.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-16 08:28 PM

I wish I could write of the hair,
and the eyes and
the soft milky white skin.
The longing for it.

But, then again,
you'd do it much better.
And you did.

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

2 posted 2003-07-16 08:39 PM

heh...nah..you'd do fine. I only try to write truthfully.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-07-16 09:25 PM

This is what I'd call really l-o-n-g-i-n-g for someone--and you expressed it exquisitely!

Warm hugs,
EA

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-07-16 10:14 PM

very touching write,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2003-07-17 01:24 AM

Very delicate and tender words from your heart!
Thanks~ A Romantic Heart

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

6 posted 2003-07-17 05:32 AM

No problem..
I love to express myself in my writing.
Thanks to you all for reading.

Jai

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

7 posted 2003-07-17 04:08 PM

Nice romantic expression...James

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