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Open Poetry #27

Fresh Smell, New Paper

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-16 08:00 PM

Today is like,
one of those days I might
want to stray from the norm,
and change the way
my words form.

Thicken the essence
of the
space
I feel,
through placement.

Or will it
to
be
breaking
lines.

By way of words, I think the finely detailed
long sentences that describe
lost love, or stealing the blue from a bird,
are what works best.

The screeching souls of
the verb and the noun,

jump around the blank pages.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

1 posted 2003-07-16 08:14 PM

Poetic attraction to your words are forming in me all the time. You have a wondorous way with them. I hope you will continue to grace us with the precious writing you conceive.

Jai

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-16 10:02 PM

nicely written,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

3 posted 2003-07-16 11:18 PM

The screeching souls of
the verb and the noun,

yes, that is right,
these guys do screech dont they some days
trying to get your attention ,writing for you sometimes changing things altogther around, like they know best,

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