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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-07-16 07:19 PM


She's So Beautiful

I can't believe
that you're
so beautiful.

But I will,
when you come
closer to me.

Won't I?

Will You?

JamesLee
July16
2003
Julia
Julie
Judy
Layla
Ruby

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JaiOfHeaven
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1 posted 2003-07-16 07:29 PM


the longing to see..I know the feeling. I've learned to train my eyes to see spirit...beyond beauty is something far more precious.
gemjop
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2 posted 2003-07-16 07:30 PM


hey Jim jams, this is another gorgeous write...love it when you're so happy!
garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-16 07:36 PM


James, I like this. It's pretty.  
Hugs  
Ethel

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-07-17 04:50 AM


Thanks Jai, gemjop and garysgirl for the nice responses...
I'm helping a friend of mine pick a name for role playing...she's lots of fun to spend time with...so far we've picked Ruby...James

vandana
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5 posted 2003-07-17 09:43 AM


enjoyed
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2003-07-17 03:48 PM


Thank you vandana for the nice response...James
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-07-22 04:10 PM


I was rereading you reply Jai and that is exactly the beauty I am talking of...
with just a glance we are attracted to the outer beauty but as we get closer to someone and they start revealing who they are on the inside the inner beauty takes its place of prominance...James

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