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Rewritten Freinds: forgotten pasts
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Rewritten Freinds: forgotten pasts |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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Friends: the memories of the past Friends turned unknown, Form abandoned sides Forever changing world explored, ageing over time Grown into old, still togetherness existed in mind An experienced past dreamt, peaceful thought repeated Memories unfolded, drained happiness once foretold Danced by riversides, golden fields explored, knee high grass Brushed against skins, absorbed summers air breathed in. Preyed on souls, laid bounded, grass tangled flesh Sprinkled dust, thickened air, sounded alert Footstep soon heard, crushed particles to soiled earth The game, Hide and seek, a childhood joy Wondering hands, scratched skin, Blooded bladed grass Touched lump, hidden away, covered in blankets Made of nature, brought to life by a child’s mind Awoken wide-eyed, memory emptied away Sweat covered face, lasted evidence, dried Dreamt world died, a forever ended game Past life vanished, present day remains Death of childhood friends, reconnected Thoughts cry tears, the grief submerged Closed eyed body, Drowned By Flooded memories Rots to dusted air, at last set free from this earth Swarmed essence, breezed to heavens gate |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
As always, beautiful. Expressing just enough.  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Lee, very well done. It appears your words have come from somewhere deep under the surface. Raw emotion and memory you use so well here. I'm impressed how your poetry has developed so much in the time you have been here. |
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