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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-07-16 06:16 PM



here in the darkness
images
from my past lives

are becoming routine
stroll with me

because
you have nothing else to do

without asking for help

we never guessed this would
happen

can you tell me where
we are


A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

[This message has been edited by QjQ (07-16-2003 06:17 PM).]

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JaiOfHeaven
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1 posted 2003-07-16 06:22 PM


No one knows..you are where you are. Embrace what it is and change you..you are the perception that makes the situation what it is. From the heart you wrote. From the heart I liked it.

Jai

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-07-16 06:59 PM


I wish I knew!

Wonderful write

vlraynes
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3 posted 2003-07-16 07:01 PM



I know this question...well said, QjQ.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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4 posted 2003-07-17 07:06 AM


wull, maybe you are just beginning to understand each other, looking at each other is a very special way...as the start of a friendship...don't read more into it...just start at the beginning thinking of her purely as one of your best male friends you've known, expecting nothing more.  Venture into the exploration of the heart and soul of her, learn from her...understanding if you both have things in common to share...the physical part will come later when both mutually agree...and then when it does, hopefully by then you will both be ready to assume a relationship with honor and respect for one another, which will lead you both into refreshing calm waters of a perception of something more then the physical...something very powerful, wise, giving and comforting....tranquil and very very special.  Love to you both...always.  
vandana
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5 posted 2003-07-17 09:47 AM


enjoyed
passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-07-17 12:50 PM


Glenn, I don't know where you are but I am here

timothysangel1973
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7 posted 2003-07-17 11:45 PM


"can you tell me where
we are"

That line provokes thoughts that live way down deep inside!

Thanks for the thoughts, and a wonderful write!

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