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JaiOfHeaven
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0 posted 2003-07-16 05:42 PM



Lollying mesmericly,
thoughts lazily waver and dissapate.
While blissful memories all mesh into a fantasy,
Embracing the luminous light of my soul,
Intense brightness unfolds blinding.

Incandescent flashes oversaturating with color tell a story,
where realistic mirages thrive in some merry illusion.
Omni-present flaring shades of light illuminate,
consume,
and shred my mind apart into little peices,
fluttering up into a heavenly ocean of stars,
like butterflies floating on a whispering breeze that uplifts their fears.

Voids of pure white suck me into oblivion,
The overflowing light perpetuously feeding me what is in awe of ecstasy.
Infinite brightness protrudes me,
In the arms of his mysterious soul.
My blood flows tranquily,
and like night to day tensions fade.

Forgotten stresses in an azure dream.

© Copyright 2003 Byron Keith Landry Jr. - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-16 05:46 PM


"In the arms of his mysterious soul.
My blood flows tranquily,
and like night to day tensions fade.

Forgotten stresses in an azure dream."

Beautifully written!

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-07-16 07:39 PM


An azure dream well worth going to sleep for!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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3 posted 2003-07-16 07:50 PM


Forgotten stresses in an azure dream.

A line I wish I could have written.

Welcome to Passions. A glorious place with brilliant and hope to be brilliant writers who all care about and support one another. I hope you will share more of your words with us.

Hugs, Marti

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4 posted 2003-07-16 07:51 PM


My blood flows tranquily,
and like night to day tensions fade.

Forgotten stresses in an azure dream.


This is really beautiful writing, Bryon.
Very peaceful feeling.  
Hugs  
Ethel

JaiOfHeaven
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5 posted 2003-07-16 07:55 PM


Thank you all from the depth of my heart. I do plan to share more with you all and I hope you all do as well. Byron^

Jai

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6 posted 2003-07-16 10:16 PM


terrific write,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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7 posted 2003-07-17 09:38 AM


enjoyed welcome to passions
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