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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-16 05:05 PM

As a woman, I
purify my
dirty words
before I speak them.

Sprinkle my ashes
slowly out the
window
of the car you driven
since 1985.

Play that song I like.
As a woman, I
appreciate the
little things in life.
Though dearly departed
I haven't yet started
to dive into the issue of
reincarnation..

As woman, I
like to stuff as many
thoughts of mine into your
ear as possible.
Cursing politics and
the way the
nail polish chips..

And if you don't agree,
as woman, I
will sit
quietly loathing
the air in which you breathe.

As woman,
I know
I'm right
when I'm wrong
and this motion is set
to "constantly".

Be calm, storm,
as I
woman:
Learn to speak.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

1 posted 2003-07-16 05:35 PM

Be calm storm.....as if your words should hinder even a storm while learning to speak. So poetic. Much love!

Jai

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

2 posted 2003-07-16 10:22 PM

enjoyed this one very much,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

3 posted 2003-07-16 10:59 PM

As a woman, you have incredible sight, mind, and heart. Loved this

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

4 posted 2003-07-16 11:11 PM

speak sister, yes, dont let them bind your thoughts, ever

Kielo
Senior Member

since 2002-02-11

Posts 1109

5 posted 2003-07-17 02:47 AM

You're a better woman than I

Kielo

Deus
Junior Member

since 2003-07-17

Posts 18
California, US

6 posted 2003-07-17 02:49 AM

I liked that a lot. Nice work.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-07-17 06:56 AM

Stay the storm...
ride the waves...
you've done a remarkable job
depicting patience.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

8 posted 2003-07-17 09:32 AM

self expression...Bravo a great write, uplifting, to the point and loaded with confidence.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-07-17 12:37 PM

wonderful!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2003-07-17 10:01 PM

What a gifted verse...
Enjoyed the honesty and freshness of your write. TD

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