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JaiOfHeaven
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0 posted 2003-07-16 04:43 PM



Hazy light breaks through paralell clouds,
open with million rays,
as the everclear cedar is defined by incandescence.

It shines with beams that spread from it's core and shred at your eyes as a barrage of twinswords.

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1 posted 2003-07-16 04:45 PM


Twin swords, eh?

Swords have always been better than guns, if you ask me.
But neither should be used unless to
protect.

Great job

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