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comp_xp
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0 posted 2003-07-16 01:29 PM



When I am Lonely...

When I am lonely
There is darkness,
in which i get lost,
Images of life appear blurred.
No one in front to share thoughts.
Even in the crowd there is no one
Only me, with my lonliness
trying to interact..
There is silence all around
It tries to become my "mate"
Whom I reject..
It calls me at times when
I am with the world,
To make me realise that
I am left alone by all..
The lyrical breeze makes me
wonder, there is music in the air,
in the dark
Impatience takes me in another way
and I cannot here what the music say..
I here the dog bark, and
try to recollect days, lost..
When the breeze blow,it takes me off
but when it stops, hits me hard..
Miles away there is a light
which blows out the misery
and makes me smile..
But not a thing to stay back,
will go away, leaving me in dark..
Silence around me, teaches me to speak
and fight with lonliness in the dark
night breeze...
The world moves but I am still
Searching for something which cannot
be seen..
When I am lonley....
darkness & silence give me company...


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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-16 02:48 PM


Welcome to Passions, where you will usually find others blowing around in the dark winds, and you won't feel alone.
have a good time visiting all the different forums and reading the great variety of Life within these blue boundaries


PS, a small typo...should be hear, not here

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-16-2003 02:49 PM).]

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-16 03:11 PM


Well, if you're feeling lonely, you need not feel that way ever again! You have found yourself a new circle of friends! Welcome to Passions!

Warm welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

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