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jennirey
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since 2002-01-24
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0 posted 2003-07-16 12:08 PM



Tugging at my eyelids
Fleetingly close
I ponder a memory of
holding you.
Sweet escape.
Ah….

I forget to remember
the pain.

You are here again.
Wanting me.
Teasing me
but not needing me
Sometimes I pretend though


I want to feel you again.

I cannot go back.
I made a choice.
Yes it seems right.
But do I want.

No.

Sometimes..

Yes…

Anchoring me
Convoluting me
I struggle

With a

Torment of choices
But do not know how to take a step
or do not want to.
So,
I stay within the safety
of
Where I am.
Fragmenting into pieces of me.


© Copyright 2003 Jennifer Reynoso - All Rights Reserved
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2003-07-16 01:13 PM


You are here again.
Wanting me.
Teasing me
but not needing me
Sometimes I pretend though

Wonderful verse and a perfect title too.
Nicely done jennierey~



vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
2 posted 2003-07-16 01:16 PM



"I forget to remember
the pain."

Yes...I know this one so well.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27
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Florida
3 posted 2003-07-16 01:32 PM


Oh yes, I have had to pick up the naked pieces of me....sigh

Wonderfully done.

Susan C.

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4 posted 2003-07-16 01:45 PM



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