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Sadly Obvious
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Sadly Obvious |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sadly Obvious I thought you were different but more of the same carbon copy with equal manner a folded paper cut to mold where each attaches to the other shape page un-pleats opens up and you just fell in the row of disappointment sad… a snowflake is what I thought I’d find "I am living a life, i have no wish to live. How did this happen?" Unknown |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is so lovely, especially the comparing of a snowflake. Beautifully written  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
you just fell in the row of disappointment Helen, I'm sorry that you were disappointed. I hope things get better for you soon.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Amature2 Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416 |
1slick_lady, it's sad to think, that just when things start to look so different, they end up looking just like the rest. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Life lived long enough in solitude becomes a binding chain of links forged from quiet moments of desperation. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Enjoyed the way you stated the obvious, and how simply you conveyed the disappointment. Nice Helen~ |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
argh..and double argh with icebox's line |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Ok Helen - Goodness . . . you always reach right down where my fears lie and embrace them xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
this reached down deep...and there is where it aches |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Wow! That's some good stuff there  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
I thought you were different but more of the same carbon copy yea, we always do, don't we, if we stopped thinking that, whats the alternative? recycled lines, from your home to mine.....they are all over the internet like flies waiting to suck your blood out [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-17-2003 06:50 AM).] |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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