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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-07-16 07:32 AM


set the laws of nature
and post rules
in direct opposition to them
the first,
submission
even angels
had the sense to question
the sense to leave

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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1 posted 2003-07-16 07:44 AM


hmmmmmmmmmm
Jeremiah Johnson
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2 posted 2003-07-16 09:00 AM


all too true. we did leave thats why the worlds in it's current state. a great piece of work hope to read more.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-


Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-07-16 12:02 PM


Hmmmmm? Is that good hmm or a bad hmmm o are you talking with a mouthful of scone? mmmm scones

thanks JJ

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-07-16 12:45 PM


Ok this is interesting . . . maybe should be in discussion . . .

I see the kingdom and the fallen angels - we very well know - we have spoken of this and yes they had the sense to leave even when things werent going their way - to start their own kingdom.  The question then lies in which "kingdom" is better for each individual.  I see the angst and know it well and adoring angels myself I think that what we have been taught is a far harsher cruelty than what is reality.  Somewhere out there there is peace -where I have no idea but there is . . . I may be totally off on this one, if I am I do apologize but angels should never leave . . . they are always by your side whether you know it or not.  As for the above mentioned, well that was one case where opposition overruled this divine gift and an argument began between God and Lucifer.  Kind of like Microsoft . . .

This is what I came away with
I do agree - am not in opposition
just see through different eyes I guess
What is one angel amongst millions anyhow?
xxoo    


[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-16-2003 12:50 PM).]

gemjop
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5 posted 2003-07-16 12:52 PM


Are you calling me a sconeaholic? It was a good hmmmmmm. A making me think hmmmmmm. scone with jam anybodeeeeeeeeeeeeee? nope, good, all the more for me.
LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-07-16 12:58 PM


I believe in this poem, there is a hint of sarcasim (sp) saying, even the angels had better sense to leave?  Yea??? Do I get a scone now.....ok now?  How bout now?
gemjop
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7 posted 2003-07-16 01:12 PM


lol. you may. I am the scone monitor. Strawberry jam on yours miss?

sorry raphael, for ruining your thread. na, i'm not.

Aenimal
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8 posted 2003-07-16 01:37 PM


My usual attack on the fictional god of religion/bible.
Hmmm how do i explain this properly. I'll let someone else explain..

" ...let me tell you a little something about god, he's a prankster..think about it. he gives man instinct. He gives you this extraordinary gift and then what does he do, i swear, for his own personal amusement his own private cosmic gag reel? He sets the rules in opposition. Look but don't touch..touch, but don't taste, taste, but don't smell..Haha. And while you're jumping from one foot to the next whats he doing? He's laughing his sick .........off. Worship THAT, never!"

~Al Pacino as satan in the devil's advocate

If by some ridiculous chance this may offend someone please feel free to deflect this on to one of the billion other factions of the same religion you feel are inferior to yours instead.

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-16-2003 01:38 PM).]

littlewing
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9 posted 2003-07-16 01:44 PM


agreed . . . cant argue with Al now can I?


[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-16-2003 01:48 PM).]

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