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Open Poetry #27

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JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

0 posted 2003-07-16 03:10 AM

Hands of spiritual love mold my soul.
Hands of my soul longing to explore her whole.
Touch not touch at all..

Touch..

A realm where every sensation is a fantasy falling into submission to reality.

Her perception becomes subliminal bliss.
Mine already the fantasy that has yet to succumb to reality.
The red petals of my mind tinged with white and yellow,
Every petal a "he loves me",
Waiting to be placed in the vase of our lives.
The place we both thrive,
A hybrid in time.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-16 03:12 AM

"Touch..

A realm where every sensation is a fantasy falling into submission to reality."

Awesome write, these lines are great.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

2 posted 2003-07-16 03:18 AM

Thanks K'...I hope I can see more of your writing as well.

Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

3 posted 2003-07-16 03:46 AM

Welcome here..

Lovely work you have. Soft and enough to get into my mood.

enjoyed

Dear John,
IF YOU'RE TIRED OF PRETENDING..
THEN WHY DID YOU GO BACK INTO HIDING?

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-16 04:07 AM

Welcome to Passions!

I'm not much for critiques but I will say I like the write! Hope to read more!

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

5 posted 2003-07-16 04:08 AM

Much obliged. I've read your writings as well. Truly heartfelt.

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2003-07-16 04:43 AM

excellently expressed and
such wonderful thoughts !!!Hope

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

7 posted 2003-07-16 01:11 PM

beautiful the last line says it all....

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