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JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

0 posted 2003-07-16 03:06 AM

Console me and turn the page of your facade!
Embrace the light the extends from the pureness inside me!
Die in your own confusion...as you leave the gentle heart,
the gentle soul,
the gentle home!

Find yourself in a room filled with light,

breathe

as the air becomes thick and constricts your lungs.
The light dissapates and you remain in your own game.
Tagging the light and sharing your misery.
Daggers dripping with poisons that eat away at even a man's spirit are your weapons..
why have you stung me with them?

My hands became silk when I touched you.
Words softer than the touch I gave.
Love beyond the word.

[This message has been edited by JaiOfHeaven (07-16-2003 04:12 AM).]

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-16 03:08 AM

"My hands became silk when I touched you."

Lovely post, and welcome to Passions, by the way!

Anticipating more from you, now.

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

2 posted 2003-07-16 03:09 AM

JaiOfHeaven~
What a lovely first post.
I enjoyed reading this and hope to see lots more from you.
Welcome to Passions!
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

3 posted 2003-07-16 03:11 AM

Thanks you guys. I am enjoying myself...

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-07-16 04:10 AM

definitely enjoying you being here...thanks for sharing

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-07-16 08:26 AM

Welcome to Passions In Poetry. I enjoyed
your first post and look forward to reading
more of your poetry and responses to our
wonderful family of poets. Please check your
e-mail for a special greeting.
Ethel----garysgirl
Moderator/Passions in poetry

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-16-2003 09:28 AM).]

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

6 posted 2003-07-16 08:56 AM

as the air becomes thick and constricts your lungs.
The light dissapates and you remain in your own game.
Tagging the light and sharing your misery.
Daggers dripping with poisons that eat away at even a man's spirit are your weapons..
why have you stung me with them?

~*~

A wonderful entrance into the World of Passions in Poetry! Welcome! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work.

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

7 posted 2003-07-16 09:00 AM

Welcome to our world...very nice write.

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

8 posted 2003-07-16 09:10 AM

yes as the others said welcome and i hope you enjoy your stay. a wonderful poem and keep up the great work.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

9 posted 2003-07-16 09:16 AM

Now this was a familiar tale but told with such a silken hand. Welcome to Passions, and I hope you are going to love the site as much as other members do. Looks like you are going to be a very welcome addition to the family.I enjoyed your first poem very much.

Mysteria

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

10 posted 2003-07-16 05:01 PM

....*feels all loved..* whoa...this is cool! Never knew there were others as passionate about writing as I am. I hope to see all of your writings as well everyone...and thanks for the welcome.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2003-07-16 05:17 PM

Enjoyed...James

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

12 posted 2003-07-17 06:53 AM

Hi Jai and welcome, what an intense write...thorougly descriptive and filled with vision...emotion and dripping with love for this person, care beyond perception...and perhaps realizing that we are never where we would sometimes wish others to be...sometimes a little behind...sometimes further ahead in our journey, but always realizing, there is purpose to all's own personal journey...thanks for this beauty.

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2003-07-17 09:18 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Very nicely written entrance post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

14 posted 2003-07-17 06:33 PM

Welcome to Passions...

Some stunning lines here...too many to pick out a few.

Enjoyed your entrance post very much.
Good to read you. ThisDiamond

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

15 posted 2003-07-17 07:20 PM

Hello new passionate poet! hope you enjoy all the variety here.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

16 posted 2003-07-17 07:36 PM

welcome to Passions in Poetry...I enjoyed your first poem...and I look forward to more..

believe in what your heart feels...

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