I Taught You the Secret to Winning Pacman

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Open Poetry #27

I Taught You the Secret to Winning Pacman

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-16 02:28 AM

Take a left at the passing breeze

head up into fields of raspberry

a right to the light at the end of the tunnel

and up again to set yourself free.

Hang a right again and dance with me all night

down to a surely endless delight.

Right again, you are, my friend

up the holy riverbend.

A right can take you in the wrong direction

down a slope that's far too steep.

I'm right, you know, I know how you think.

I'll take it down a notch and let it sink.

Take a left at the passing breeze.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

1 posted 2003-07-16 02:34 AM

...once again I have to be ungentle. You took me on a roller coaster ...every which way and to the left. Made me feel all gooey inside. Really...you have a uniqueness about you. Keep on writing ...I can't wait to see what you post next...oh yeah...It seems I can't submit any poems. Says it's updating and yet you just did. How to I sumbit?

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-07-16 02:37 AM

Ah, I click on "New Topic", then I write on..and then comes the mighty submit.

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

3 posted 2003-07-16 03:02 AM

Thanks K'... appreciate it.

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