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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA 
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God@heaven.com Faith stained fingertips print upon 'send,' typed of trust in waiting, anticipating. First email: no reply, Second email: "user unknown," and, the third time: "undeliverable." But, then again, I've always known this. It's okay, God, really it is, you're too busy, I understand. So, I'll just hit 'delete' as heart words weep a blank screen. Melissa Long-Monette Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Wow...Melissa...this just aches off the page. Big heart hugs to you, friend.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Figures we're thinking about the same thing..grin great write |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Awesome presentation Melissa . . . indeed indeed xxoo |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
That was kinda sad. Can't relate, but it was a unique metaphor. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Totally unique, which is what makes it so great.  |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Sometimes He just chooses to reply in ways we don't expect. But I've got to admit, I've felt this way before, too... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Melissa, Well I can't say your mind isn't working, LOL Well done enjoyed. |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
This is really sweet. I know what you mean. Actually, I found it kind of funny in a way, it reminded me of "Bruce Almighty". Hope that doesn't offend, because it is a lovely write. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
Having recently watched Jim Carrey's new movie...this has more than a poignant feeling... I won't give the storyline away - that would not be fair - but it is decidedly disconcerting on both ends. Excellent write, MelyBee |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Excellent write..much enjoyed! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Wow... I wish I didn't know what this feels like |
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Ringo
since 2003-02-20
Posts 3684Saluting with misty eyes |
Man, I wish I had written this. This is very nicely done. We see the light of those |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Malissa...understanding this...well done! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Don't you just hate not getting a reply? Nice work, as always. Sandra |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Melissa, you've just written another  in my books!  Warm hugs, EA P.S. I think you may have keyed in the wrong e-mail address... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
He's there, trust me on this. Nicely penned, Melissa! |
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