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Open Poetry #27

Over The Line

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-15 10:34 PM

Over The Line

what was this seed of thought
that grew from one thing to another
that made me replace words
with other things that use to be important
and how is it that I live without them
black lines scratched on white pages
to become my very beat and breath
loneliness alone or lonely with another
there has to be a line past this
there has to be, there has to be

"if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

1 posted 2003-07-15 11:24 PM

one toke over the line sweet jesus..one toke over the line.....

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-07-15 11:34 PM

...sittin' down town in a railway station, one toke over the line...

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-07-15 11:57 PM

nice

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-07-16 12:03 PM

Importance, is a fine line indeed~

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

5 posted 2003-07-16 08:12 AM

Inspired writing Helen...as always.
Eric

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-07-16 08:33 AM

1slick_lady
There is, well done.

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