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Ribbons of Raindrops
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Ribbons of Raindrops |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio 
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Ribbons of Raindrops Ribbons of raindrops splashing across my window pane Flowing down like sheets of broken glass to my bleeding tormented heart filled with pain. Ribbons of raindrops streaming down my torn and battered consciousness Tears traveling down to my frozen heart while a torrential storm bombards my broken memories. Ribbons of raindrops flowing on a wall of granite Ribbons of black streaming from my tears for the loved ones’ I have lost. Ribbons of raindrops splashing across my window pane Ribbons of teardrops flowing across my shattered broken heart. Bonnie J.  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee this is a fabulous read n write,, well done bon-bon... A voice of honesty |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I concur!  |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
The rain can have a sense of melancholy attached to it, nicely written. |
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