Go Fly A Kite - Repost for Melissa (Honeybee)

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vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

0 posted 2003-07-15 08:57 PM

                                go
                                 fly
                                a kite
                              while  the
                            breeze  is  just
                         right,   and   cotton
                     clouds   soften   the   sun
                 take in  the beauty  of  flowers
                     and  trees ... listen  as  the
                        sweet  songs  of  birds
                            fill ..... the ..... air,
                               singing  their
                                 praises to
                                   heaven
                                    above
                                     when
                                      life
                                       is
                                       so
                                        c
                                         r
                                          a
                                           z
                                            y
                                           and
                                             y
                                            o
                                           u
                                          r
                                       mind's
                                          in
                                       a whirl
                                           j
                                            u
                                             s
                                              t
                                             take
                                              s
                                             o
                                            m
                                           e
                                         time
                                          a
                                           n
                                            d
                                            go
                                             f
                                            l
                                           y
                                          a
                                           k
                                            i
                                             t
                                              e

                       -vlraynes

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes
[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-15-2003 09:01 PM).]

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-07-15 09:03 PM

terrific and beautiful,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2003-07-15 09:27 PM

Vicky, you've went above and beyond the challenge

This is the best 'shape' poem that I've ever seen or read...so clever and a wonderful message!

This is a keeper!

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

3 posted 2003-07-15 09:28 PM

Cool. How did you get that to line up that?
The little ones in the neighborhood and I love to go in the field and fly kites.
Good one.
Bon-Bon

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-07-15 09:59 PM

Vicky, this is really good....
the message and the style.

Hugs

Ethel

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

5 posted 2003-07-16 01:41 PM

That is so cool

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

6 posted 2003-07-16 01:46 PM

Oh Vicky, this is beyond awesome. I am in awe of anyone who can make shape poems. The words, the colors, the shape -- really incredible.

I have to run, I'm going out to fly my kite!

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

7 posted 2003-07-16 01:48 PM

Vicky...your kite is almost as fun as the real thing....well, okay, it is as fun!

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