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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-07-15 06:43 PM



our silhouettes cast shadows in
the serene of solitude
~
as i look into your eyes i see the
reflection of my love within
~
all at once we voluntary surrender
our selves to each
~
we have shared many encounters
of romantic interludes together



A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2003-07-15 10:48 PM


Nicely done. Really liked the couplets, they give such power to the capsules of emotion beating in each. TD
vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-07-15 11:07 PM



Just lovely, QjQ...such beautiful heart thoughts.
Wonderfully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-07-15 11:54 PM


"all at once we voluntary surrender
our selves to each "

Extremely powerful words QjQ

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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4 posted 2003-07-16 07:36 AM


Pleasant reading.
GREAT write!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
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5 posted 2003-07-16 07:56 AM


Keep sharing those romantic interludes...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

LeeJ
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6 posted 2003-07-16 01:10 PM


a very pretty write
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