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Open Poetry #27
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P.R.C
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since 2003-01-31
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Hull, England

0 posted 2003-07-15 06:01 PM



You are the sun that shines in my eyes
You are my first thought when I wake
You are my each and every sigh
You are the reason my heart does ache
You are the wind in my hair
You are my blood in my heart
You are my friend thats never there
You are the distance keeping us apart
You are the tears I cry when Im alone
You are my teddy I hold so tight
You are the one I will never get to call my own
You are my darkness at night
You are the pillow I rest my head on
You are the flame that burns inside of me
You are the shoulder I dont have to cry on
You are the every feeling I hide from you, but you dont see
You are the rain that falls on my face
You are the one who infested my head
You are the one who makes my heart race
Do you still notice that you are my world?

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garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-07-15 10:34 PM


A beautiful poem, with an ache to it.
Hugs  
Ethel

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 207
California, Usa
2 posted 2003-07-16 01:58 AM


"......." is all I have to say. The feeling you described put into words..was vivid. The very same feelings I've felt and am currently feeling. Nice to know i'm not the only one. Keep writing...
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-07-16 02:12 AM


like a greeting card...very nice
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