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0 posted 2003-07-15 11:37 AM



Graphic by Judys Sigs

~>o<~
I see
Into  your   eyes
I cherish what's within
Worth more than siver, gold,  riches
In them I see the ~treasures~ of your love
Your love is more precious than gems
I see this in your eyes
Your heart in love
I see
~>o<~




Okay, I cheated a little bit with the rictameter. LOL  Melissa, I really am going to try to do a heart or teardrop shape poem soon, though.  

This is the link to Honeybee's challenge.... /pip/Forum80/HTML/002645.html


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1 posted 2003-07-15 11:41 AM


How so precious...simply beautiful...thank you for sharing
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2 posted 2003-07-15 03:01 PM



LOL...I see what you mean, Ethel!  But it all gets around to the same thing, doesn't it?

True love...

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3 posted 2003-07-15 03:03 PM


Yep, it sure does, Eliza. HaHa!! I think it's funny that we did that on the same day. Don't you? LOL
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-07-15 03:05 PM


Lee, I'm sorry. I got tickled at me and Eliza and didn't remember you were there. I really do thank you for liking my little rictameter. I appreciate you reading and replying.
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-07-15 03:22 PM


well ya" did it again,,  terrific  n beautiful.....

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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6 posted 2003-07-15 03:30 PM


Thank you, Glenn. I appreciate that.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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7 posted 2003-07-15 06:12 PM


enjoyed
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8 posted 2003-07-15 08:13 PM



hehe It's all good....the hopeless romantic in me enjoys sentimental verse like this and that picture is beautiful!

Melissa

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9 posted 2003-07-15 10:04 PM


Vandan, thank you. I appreciate that.  
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Melissa, I'm glad that you liked it. I really am going to try a real shape poem. I really do like yours.
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Hugs to you both  
Ethel

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10 posted 2003-07-16 03:23 PM


Ahhhh i love it! To look into someones eyes and SEE the love they have, youre right, is priceless. thanks for the memory.

much love,
gem xxx

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