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Carolina
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0 posted 2003-07-15 09:33 AM


If I owned all the time in the world
I would stop the clocks
so that I wouldn't spend
another minute
without you


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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-07-15 09:37 AM


Carolina
Them are serious words, well done. Enjoyed.

JaiOfHeaven
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2 posted 2003-07-16 05:54 PM


That is how I feel alot of times. Nice to know i'm not alone. Sometimes I wish I could become time...so that I'm never without that special person.

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Albert J. Allie
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3 posted 2003-07-16 06:28 PM


Should I say it?

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gemjop
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4 posted 2003-07-16 06:29 PM


brought a tear to my eye. and a sigh in my heart. wonderful words.
vlraynes
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5 posted 2003-07-16 09:43 PM



Yes...I like this very much.
Very nicely said.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-07-16 09:51 PM


Oh, how I wish I could do this too.....
I would never miss another second with my Honey-Love.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Local Rebel
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7 posted 2003-07-17 01:09 AM


nothing would be finer!  
thats my Carolina
  see you at PU

Local Rebel
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8 posted 2003-07-17 01:09 AM


*burp*

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Local Rebel
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9 posted 2003-07-17 01:09 AM


scuse me

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Local Rebel
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10 posted 2003-07-17 01:09 AM


net gas  

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Carolina
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11 posted 2003-07-17 09:49 AM


Me thinks the class will run over this time
gemjop
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12 posted 2003-07-21 08:13 PM


bump
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