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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Opening hatch heat has risen stifling stuffy air I breathe in and decide my pain would mingle well amongst this stale Searching between the forgotten I have found the perfect home for you to stay until I can stumble upon you and smile in memory without stab of sorrow I shall leave you here before i descend to clean air closed door loved half forgotten for me to survive. [This message has been edited by gemjop (07-15-2003 09:32 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
you speak the words which I have felt, but not yet written,it's taken me years to get to this point...and now ready...to move on...with "his" help...his admition, that it was not I he was in love with...now, closure..pain, emptiness, but closure, thank God! I finally needed to know one way or the other, and did not fear the consequences of my last meeting with him. Thank you dear lady for many words of encouragement. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
gemjop Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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collarbone_girl Junior Member
since 2003-07-14
Posts 45Wonderland |
yeah. this was pretty. and it dripped with a beautiful melancholy only capable if it's from the heart, yay for you! This Cool Night Air Is Curious... |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, we all love you, remember...    Many hugs from us all Ethel Mae |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Thats a keeper Gem. A real good one...thingie..whatever, the point is i liked it  Don't it allways seem to go, |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Lee, wow, i'm proud of you lady. So glad to hear your pain is nearing an end. May it be merely a dull ache in the attic of your mind as soon as possible. I hope you do find closure, it sounds like you deserve some peace and happiness. much love, and thanks again. xx Seymour, thankyou my lovely. xx Collarbone_girl, from the heart completely..thankyou for reading and replying. xx Ethel Mae, I know. Thankyou. And I love you! xx  Liz, thanks so much, glad u liked my thingie xx |
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