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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-07-15 09:17 AM


Lacing My Days


There are times
when I awake, the early hours
giving me pause,
my words scatter,
brained too deep.

I look you over, wondering
if what I see, in eyes of truth, mine,
is unmasked before me
allowing me to settle in,
feel the flow, and master
my fantasies.

At the moment, I feel untitled,
neither loved nor in the process of,
the emptiness becoming the norm.
The quietness touching me
more often than not.

If it rained on me today,
I doubt whether I would feel soaked,
but instead would enjoy its touch
breaking the monotony
of another summer day.

I wonder if second chances
were meant for me, if body language
says more than I wish it to,
pushing away what could be.

There's strength in fear,
protecting me from dark illusions,
from betrayals and flashbacks
of crumbling walls.

I am held in a kiss,
one that has walked away
leaving me drifting,
studying cloud formations
pretending I see more
than what's there, so I can lace my days
in golden dreams, center my mood
in tomorrow's gain
and save a smile for you.

M



[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (07-15-2003 09:31 AM).]

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-07-15 09:19 AM


Wow...!!
Eric

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2 posted 2003-07-15 09:22 AM


I am held in a kiss,
one that has walked away
leaving me drifting,
studying cloud formations
pretending I see more
than what's there, so I can lace my days
in golden dreams, center my mood
in tomorrow's gain
and save a smile for you.


A very beautiful love poem, Maureen.
I enjoyed reading it.  
Hugs to you  
Ethel

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state of mind
3 posted 2003-07-15 10:25 AM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-07-15 10:35 AM


giving me pause,
my words scatter,
brained too deep

Maureen..you made me sigh deep. good to read you lady. xx

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