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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-15 06:06 AM



His whiskers tickle my cheek.
He could possibly whine for hours,
if I didn't interrupt,
"Oh! My poor baby!
Life must be so dreadfully hard,
for a kitty"!
But, I digress..
for my dreams wouldn't be complimented
without the strumming of soft fur,
and the echo of his purr.

Never is a promise, and you can't afford to lie.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
VOE
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1 posted 2003-07-15 06:12 AM


Where would we be without the babies in our lives that give us such unconditional love and loyalty?  I enjoyed this tremendously, and although I have a puppy, it is the same warm feeling I get from her.  Thank you for this one!!  ~~V~~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-15 11:13 AM


man & beast can meld a heart...very lovely write
JaiOfHeaven
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3 posted 2003-07-16 03:00 AM


Although you were speaking of a cat..it was sensual indeed. well it's how you feel so I appreciate that.
KoKo
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4 posted 2003-07-16 06:46 PM


LOVED this...definitly needs a bump back to the top!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-07-16 10:21 PM


cute write,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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6 posted 2003-07-16 11:10 PM


there are days that only he could soothe me........my sweet little cat, miquel, and sometimes he is truly my favorite child
Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-07-17 08:30 PM


yes I'm into heavy petting too..wait that's different..uh nevermind. next train to hell boarding in 5 minutes...

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-17-2003 08:31 PM).]

Kaoru
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8 posted 2003-07-18 02:21 AM


Lol..
Well, not to say I'm not either..er..
I've got my train ticket!

Thanks to you all for the sweet comments!

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