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Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-15 06:02 AM

Remember Me

Remember me
when I leave and go beneath
the darkened earth in quiet sleep.
Remember
that it is only for a little while,
just the blink of an eye.
Remember my laughter, not my pain.
Remember my smile, not my tears.
Remember my gentle ways,
not my anger and frustration.
Remember,
“I Love You,”
and
one day,
I will return to your arms
and
loving embrace.
Remember when we meet again,
there will be no
pain or sorrow only
peace and happiness.
Remember Me

Bonnie J.

VOE
Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

1 posted 2003-07-15 06:09 AM

I must say that this is truly beautiful, and so very very special. For personal reasons, I am making this the first addition to my Passion's library, and if it is ok with you, I would at some point like to put it to song. It is beautiful... ~~V~~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Bonnie j
Senior Member

since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

2 posted 2003-07-15 06:53 AM

Hi VOE
I'm glad you liked this poem. I have given as a card for friends and family when there has been a death in the family.One girl had it framed and was used at a relatives funeral.Since I'm a music lover I would love to hear it to music a soft kind of melody, piano or guitar. Will talk to you later have to go to work.
Bonnie aka Bon-Bon

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-07-15 11:11 AM

this is overwhelming and poignant...bittersweet with faith and care, written from that warm heart of yours...would make a lovely song Bonnie. Thank you for sharing.

Spiros Zafiris
Senior Member

since 2002-10-20

Posts 982
Canada

4 posted 2003-07-15 11:35 AM

..Bonnie j../\..very lovingly honest; very nice..

../\..Spiros

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-07-15 01:04 PM

just beautiful, i love "remember me" poems

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18