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Las Flores |
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Old_Shoe_New_Laces Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 31 |
Las Flores "A poem about flowers," she said. "Flowers?" "Yes, flowers..." and all I could think about was the rain and a red cardinal sitting in a pine tree. [This message has been edited by Old_Shoe_New_Laces (07-15-2003 12:47 AM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love this!!  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
funny how the mind wanders sometimes... I love red cardinals, and this is a beauty of a write |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Oh yeah...this is wonderful... "and all I could think about was the rain and a red cardinal sitting in a pine tree." Love the simplicistic beauty...  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Old_Shoe_New_Laces Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 31 |
Not really wandering in the mind at all. Although it might appear that way at first glance. It's really all metaphor. Simple yes, but it has layers. Thank you for the comments. Appreciated. |
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