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KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-07-14 10:22 PM


You are an angelically white crow
Swimming through the deepest blue
And I, a lonely ladybug,
Await your pecking beak
To pick me up, take me away,
So I may see the world you do.


I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

[This message has been edited by KoKo (07-14-2003 10:27 PM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-14 10:23 PM


Ooh! This is good!
KoKo
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2 posted 2003-07-14 10:25 PM


Thanks muchly!

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-07-14 10:26 PM


Up, up and a-w-a-y! Fly free and fly high into the cerulean blue sky!

"...a lonely ladybug"--I'll keep you company, Dear Lauren! I love ladybugs!

Loves 'n hugs,
EA

KoKo
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4 posted 2003-07-14 10:28 PM


AAAAaaw, thanks EA!!!!! You're a darling

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

garysgirl
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5 posted 2003-07-14 10:42 PM


Koko, I really like this. It has a desire
to fly free in it.  
Maybe like a butterfly??  
    

Hugs  
Ethel


Edder
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6 posted 2003-07-15 12:40 PM


i see you're in top form again...well done lauren!
VOE
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7 posted 2003-07-15 05:28 AM


I love the analogy of this one!  A ladybug wishing to be consumed by the object of her affections, so she will become part of the grand scheme....just fantastic in theme and form!!!  Bravo!!

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

KoKo
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8 posted 2003-07-15 10:45 AM


Thanks Eddles

VOE: You're absolutely right! Thanks

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Edder
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9 posted 2003-07-15 11:04 AM


G'mornin lauren!
KoKo
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10 posted 2003-07-15 11:05 AM


Hey you!!! Mornin' to you tooooo!!! ^-^

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Albert J. Allie
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11 posted 2003-07-16 06:51 PM



gemjop
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12 posted 2003-07-16 07:01 PM


Loved this!

i'm keeping it!

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