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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-07-14 08:34 PM

Needle dragged
across the plane
surface to soul
scratched
pop and hiss
lyrical fragments
and disjointed rhythms

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-14 08:37 PM

Ooh, I'm the first! This is awesome, always a pleasure to read your work

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-14 08:45 PM

Thanks Kaoru appreciate iit

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-07-14 09:09 PM

Damn..you are good. you never fail to please no mater what excuse you make

Don't it allways seem to go,
that you don't know what you've got till' it's gone
-counting crows

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

4 posted 2003-07-14 09:16 PM

This is a way cool and clever write...
You amaze me with your dark and descriptive way with pen.
As always, you are able to bring both simple and complex alive on paper.
One "lives and feels" your words when reading them. Yeppers, I'm keeping this.

Damn...damn, DAMN, damn, DAMN! (there I got it out of my system)

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

[This message has been edited by Honeybee (07-14-2003 09:19 PM).]

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-07-14 09:19 PM

Thanks Liz I aim to please

lol Thanks Melissa you sure you got it out of your system? As always I really appreciate the support..word

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-07-14 09:24 PM

Wowzer Raph, you really know how to convey that sticky feeling!

Nice going, you~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

7 posted 2003-07-14 10:16 PM

. . . havent heard that in a long time seeing as I have NO idea where to get a new needle . . . miss it much though I do . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-14-2003 10:17 PM).]

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-07-14 10:27 PM

yes, the collection sits like old soldiers
without a war sad i guess; unlike you, i have to pay the price of really thinking im old, when i
dust them off now and then

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-07-15 02:52 AM

geez...that's it...just what i feel...yeah

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