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Open Poetry #27

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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-14 06:28 PM

Soft white,
and grey.
Fur gathers,
nape of neck.
Wet teeth,
clench ..
angry growl of
wolf in twilight.
In ledgend, roaming,
paws grasp dirt
as to climb steeply.
Brushed wind twinkles
through mountain top.
Howling,
as the trees fall lifeless.
Running from
machine, pallid.
Destroying life,
the spirits
in nature.
The wolf who
is soft grey,
trying to save
it'svoice..

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (07-14-2003 06:28 PM).]

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

1 posted 2003-07-14 06:40 PM

again, great imagery...only thing I would want to say, there seems to be a deeper feeling that you touch on in this piece that you could explore...

your style is gracefull, im a fan

Mike

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-14 08:49 PM

Absolutely fantastic imagery here

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