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Rhythm (for KoKo)
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Rhythm (for KoKo) |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Lauren- thanks for the "word"  thanks for being there...and most of all, thanks for inspiring me to write again.rhythm in wake of pen gliding as sail in wind flowing to margin’s end spinning these tales of yen woven in twist and bend proving a heart can mend |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
the visual imagery and the italics were great adds gj Mike |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Edder~ I absolutely loved the flow of emotion... especially the ending, that really does it for me. Nice, nice work poet sir~ Keep inspiring the man, koko~ |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Mike- thank you, sir. glad you enjoyed. Blues- nice to see you here, dear lady. thanks for reading me. |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
EDDLES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FOR MEEEEEEEEEE?  Golly jee gosh im...STUNNED and...FLATTERED.....and...oooh you've given me butterflies...Thanks so so so so much darlin'  !!!!  And you already KNOW I love this!!! Yes, yes, I do. And it's already been written down. Aaaaaaw Mr. McEddleroo you are absolutely the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, thank you KoKo for inspiring Edder to write again! Now lookie here! A very fine poem has been born and I am thankful for the opportunity to have read it! The flow, the rhythm, the story... It's all there! --and a happy ending to boot!--the heart gets mended!  Huggums, EA |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Lauren-  Linda- lauren prodded me out of a 10 year hibernation and brought me here, i owe her alot. she's a remarkable young lady. |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
This is wonderful, flowing, and inspirational, and my thanks also to Lauren for getting you back into writing!! It's a pleasure to read from your pen!! I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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