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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-14 05:02 PM


The sky,
it owns us.
The clouds,
as gods above.
Keeping us
inside, dry and safe,
from the wrath of
water droplets.
And cloaked,
a city can become
small like we are.
Miniature carousel,
rain keeps us
spinning.
Disorderly, chaotic
winds.
Cold, calm our
throats so that we
may swallow
these
war clouds.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Magic Solias
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1 posted 2003-11-14 02:09 AM


One of the best poems I have read using this fantastic style.  You rule the cloudy skies!

Magic Solias

"we dream to love and love to dream"

GlisteningRain
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The clouds
2 posted 2004-05-27 08:16 PM


This one got caught in my throat.
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