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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-14 04:05 PM


I watch Lauren play
with her slide, and her spiders
all questions answered

and Jessica says
noone is home to play with
and so I reply

I am off today
so lets play while you teach me
what life really means

she smiles and says "dad"
It was you, that just farted
no "frogs" in the couch

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-14-2003 04:27 PM).]

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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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New York
1 posted 2003-07-14 04:15 PM


Jason lmaooo
lmaooo sorry - the writing was great but this did make me smile lmaooo  - this should be in DARK lmaooooooooo sorry
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-15-2003 02:27 AM).]

Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
2 posted 2003-07-14 10:28 PM


hehe
KoKo
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Inside the shadow's shadow
3 posted 2003-07-15 10:59 AM


LOL I love this!~!~!~! Writing it down, I am! lol

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

passing shadows
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displaced
4 posted 2003-07-15 01:10 PM


*bursting out in giggle*
Midnitesun
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Gaia
5 posted 2003-07-16 12:47 PM


LOL. I've heard them called barking spiders.
Thanks for the laugh, Jason.

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
6 posted 2003-07-16 12:49 PM



ROFLMBO!  This is priceless...love it! LOL

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

timothysangel1973
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Never close enough
7 posted 2003-07-16 12:52 PM


cute!
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