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littlewing
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0 posted 2003-07-14 03:34 PM



Sleek black keys
call to me
this addiction
fruition
hardly reached
In this solemn
desperate plea
to be free
of this monstrosity
which beckons me
Shamefully
I succumb
to the light
burning bright
extinguishing my darkness
imparted
hand in hand they stroll
to complete
the death of my soul

© Copyright 2003 Sue Eckam - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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Moved from a shack to a barn
1 posted 2003-07-14 03:37 PM


Well, It's not THAT bad, is it?

There's still plenty good to be found, if you look around carefully.


Ed

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2003-07-14 03:38 PM


LOL, my monster is a Sony Vaio.

enjoyed

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
3 posted 2003-07-14 03:40 PM


Hewlett Packard XP...

sigh...

serenity blaze
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4 posted 2003-07-14 03:44 PM


chuckle...

well, it's pretty bad when ALL of your addictions hold hands, circling you, beating those little native drums and taunting you with a huge kettle of water, boiling, just in your view, while prodding at you with spears, laughing.

OH.



That's MY ADDICTIONS...

hee heee heeeeeeee....


Cpat Hair
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5 posted 2003-07-14 03:45 PM


LOL... let's see... 4 Dell servers, one Compaq..two multi processor clone PC's... pick one..they all are the death of me.. not to mention the 3 development boxes...


Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-07-14 03:50 PM


littlewing - play those keys for me my lady, shed those pains on my shoulder, then sing me in whispers a lullaby...

BC

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
7 posted 2003-07-14 03:51 PM


built mine....and God, it was so fast a year ago...

Jason

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-07-14 04:13 PM


Ed: lol - no it isnt that bad - I mentioned the light and the dark up there . . .
the good and the bad hand in hand . . .
thank you

ahahah thanks Kacy

Karilea - yes . .  sigh exactly
thank you

Ok K - step away from the PC . . .
LMAO - LMAO . . . thank you

Damn Ron you need PCA . . . lol
thank you

Bill . . . now how did I know you would have sweet words for me huh? A lullaby . . . I shall try
thank you

Jason LMAOOOO . . . built yours?
Very cool - I will be knowing how to do that soon

Thanks guys for reading my gibberish
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
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Florida
9 posted 2003-07-14 04:34 PM


I...gasp...do not even have internet at home! LOL this means if the muse attacks me at home I have to copy to disc and take it to work to post it on the lovely pages of blue....god..I am pathetic...looking up the number for earthlink...

Susan

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
10 posted 2003-07-14 04:44 PM


Well, I've got a Mac Monster and I'm not giving her up for anything. Sure she keeps me up nights and has me running all over town looking for software to update; but she's my monster love and I'm holding on to her keys and wires with all my might!

Huggles ...

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-07-14 04:47 PM


LOL Susan - be afraid . . . be very afraid . . .  is a good thing
thank you

Marti - lmaooo well I never said I was giving it up now did I? LOL
thank you

Thanks guys
xxoo

gemjop
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12 posted 2003-07-14 04:58 PM


lol, this is so bloomin true. addictive is not harsh enough a word is it? glad i'm not the only one. xx
inkedgoddess
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13 posted 2003-07-14 07:20 PM


yes, as much as i hate them, like a man
they do have a function now and then

Wind
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14 posted 2003-07-14 07:48 PM


looks like I forgot to respod. hehe

DAMN- you're good. I mean really good

Don't it allways seem to go,
that you don't know what you've got till' it's gone
-counting crows

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
15 posted 2003-07-14 08:45 PM


Kind of like the old 'love, hate' syndrome?

You've got such a nice way of touching the keys,  tweets~

littlewing
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16 posted 2003-07-15 01:58 AM


gem - worse than smoking I believe . . .
mann . . . need . . . to . . . pry . . . fingers . . . a - way . . .
thank you

ahahahaha Michele - LMAO - yes they sure do
thank you

Thank you Liz - made me smile today

hey Bluesy - thank you - that was sweet and yes love/hate indeed this damn PC

Thanks guys
xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
17 posted 2003-07-15 02:56 AM


hehehe....I am just so there with ya!
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
18 posted 2003-07-15 03:29 AM


Time just flies when you're on these machines!
Great write, we're all there.

Mick Hawkes
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Tees-side , England
19 posted 2003-07-15 03:39 AM


they say you never forget that first love!.. but i hide her in the attic covered in dust!..my VIC 20!.. lol

Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive!

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
20 posted 2003-07-15 03:41 AM



LOL...enjoyed both poem and replies.
Thanks for the chuckle, Sue.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

bslicker
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state of mind
21 posted 2003-07-15 10:28 AM



bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

dreambuilder
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caddyshack
22 posted 2003-07-15 05:50 PM


Hi,
My name is Mike
I'm an internet addict

Hiii mike...

lol - I'll always be addicted - but I am slowly forcing myself to seek the memories built offline at least as much as I do online.
argghhhhh - what is that scorching, blinding, evil thing ...
ohhh yeah... daylight

As always I enjoy your writing & hey ...
lets go for a walk sometime... lol - maybe moonlit I don't know if my eyes can take direct sunlight - lmao

Mike -
PCA
"I'm not just a member
I'm the president"

vandana
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23 posted 2003-07-15 06:08 PM


enjoyed
Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
24 posted 2003-07-15 08:40 PM


Compaq deskpro...and it blows..built part of it myself but it's still a frigging Compaq motherboard in the end..piece o' crap $&#^%
Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
25 posted 2003-07-15 09:35 PM


Mine was made by Joe Geritol or is that Joe Generic sometimes it's so slow it must be Joe Geritol.LOL
Bon-Bon

garysgirl
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26 posted 2003-07-15 10:28 PM


Yep, I'm one of them there PC addicts, too....bet ya can't tell, huh?
Gary didn't want me to get on the internet, and now he  really doesn't like the internet!!

But, I still love this computer. I think it would be harder to stop this than it was cigarettes....especially since I've got XP now, and a scanner and burner and stuff. And, I'm about to wear my printer out.....

Ceinwyn
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27 posted 2003-07-15 10:47 PM


I sowwies..*sighs* me bed calls me I'm a bit stubborn..wishing u'd get on yer dell and talk to me

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

littlewing
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New York
28 posted 2003-07-16 12:19 PM


Dix lol I KNOW - and TG  thank you

Kaoru - yes indeed . . . is why I dont sleep lol thanks

Mick - a Vic 20 - ok I dont know what that is LOL - so what are you typing on now?
My first love ahaha that was good thank you

Vicky, m'dear your most welcome and thank you

Bonnie - LMAOOOO sounds like my first one - I couldnt even download a screensaver - the whole thing would bzzzzt out on me . . . thank you  

Thanks Bernie!

Mike - LMAOOO - yes yes you know I figured that by now they really should have this listed as an actual addiction . . . one time I actually found a chat room for chatter's anonymous!  Oxymoron . . . LMAO
ahh that was funny thank you too sweet

Raph - I didnt know you built part of yours?  Very cool and LMAO - what is so wrong with compaq?  LMAO I keep a hammer by mine just in case . . . thank you

Ethel - ahahaha no I couldnt tell - geez your as bad as me on this thing all night long . . . Oh God - no Bill HATED this thing . . . (he secretly used it when I wasnt home though) lol - made me smile you did - thank you

Kris - awww is good to sleep for once and I will . . . no worries thank you miss you too

Thanks guys
xxoo  


[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-16-2003 12:22 AM).]

Mick Hawkes
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29 posted 2003-07-16 02:47 AM


A Vic 20 was made by commadore & was my first computer back in about 1980ish! when you loaded date with cassettes Ahh them were the days!.. lol .. im on a good old Packard Bell now

Never take life too seriously - None of us gets out alive!

littlewing
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Posts 9655
New York
30 posted 2003-07-16 12:52 PM


ahahaha Thanks Mick - lol - my first PC was an old apple thing that you had to type DOS with . . .
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