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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-07-14 02:01 PM


My love,

There is a journey that awaits
As destiny anticipates
For we awoke to find in each
Two strangers bound in loves beseech

There could be more, but never less
As dawn departs its misty dress
For we have found in masked conclude
Two searching hearts, grand fortitude

There are those things still yet to know
As voices soft trade soothed bestow
For we remain in thought so rare
Two friends by heart, a dream to dare

My love,

There lies a founding truth
Enlightened wings, in living proof
For we once dreamed as strangers then
Our hearts remain to love again

Copyright Kkh 7/13/03

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2003-07-14 02:10 PM


TD

There is something ancient in the feeling expressed in this poem...perhaps because love like this is timeless?  Well done, as always!

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
2 posted 2003-07-14 03:24 PM


TD,
This truly is a classic poem.  Hmmm, I think I have someone who should hear this.  I will see him tomorrow.  Hope you don't mind if I do a reading for him. (Smiles)

Patricia

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
3 posted 2003-07-14 05:07 PM


A wonderfully written piece. I enjoyed it very much.  

Hugs ...

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-07-14 05:15 PM


Very beautiful...so much enjoyed the read Kathleen.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Paul Wilson
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5 posted 2003-07-14 05:46 PM


TD...Wonderful words. Enjoyed...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2003-07-14 08:16 PM


Kathleen, I really enjoyed the way you wrote this...very heartfelt..

believe in what your heart feels...

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