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Open Poetry #27
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Kandi
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since 2000-06-14
Posts 354
North of Hell

0 posted 2003-07-14 11:45 AM


You could almost compensate with your hand
for what your heart isn't ready to feel.
But I need something deeper than this.
Understand I need something real.

I could almost cover for your frozen heart
and drag this heat out until it dies.
But you're looking for indifference,
and I refuse to feed your lies.

We could almost exist back-to-back
in these hollow walls we've built.
But you can't give up this role you play
and I won't spare you the guilt.

© Copyright 2003 Kristin - All Rights Reserved
Tim
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since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

1 posted 2003-07-14 09:22 PM


You expressed your point well, and that is good.  enjoyed.
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