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garysgirl
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0 posted 2003-07-14 10:04 AM



Graphic from Pandoras box Sigs

When I think I have fallen
                       to the deepest
                                     the deepest depths
                                                           of love
I seem to feel myself falling
                             even deeper
                                        falling deeper
                                                          deeper in love

This has all been a surprise to me
I thought that I could control
my emotions better than this
I thought that the wall I had built up
                                      would remain
                                                   and not crumble
                                                                        down

But it has
               and it is
                             crumbling
I thought that my emotions were stronger than this
but they are not

Because
I have fallen
              deeply
                     and hopelessly
                                    and wildly  and madly
                                                                 in love with you

and it feels absolutely marvelous!!





[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-15-2003 01:24 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Ethel GG Kent - All Rights Reserved
wranx
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1 posted 2003-07-14 11:20 AM


well, Good for you gal!
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-07-14 11:41 AM


Finally we have a photo of you and your Honey-Love Gary! You are both as beautiful as I knew you would be!

Lovely poem from the pen of a romantic soul.


EA

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3 posted 2003-07-14 11:59 AM


  
The walls do crumble down don't they. I think its worth being exposed, despite what pain may come or what once was, the experience of such love is worth feeling so vulnerable isn't it.

This makes me happy and sad. You know how i feel at the moment. I love it all the same, because of how happy you are feeling, and you deserve every moment of it!



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4 posted 2003-07-15 12:33 PM


Any one ever tell ya love looks good on you?
Lovely heart on sleeve write poetess Ethel...
enjoy swimming in the deep end

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5 posted 2003-07-15 12:38 PM


Ethel:

you do make me smile so . . .
Good for you!
This one . . . yes it is my favorite
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-07-15 12:41 PM



Ah yes...this is beautiful, Ethel...and agreeing
with JM here...love looks VERY good on you.
Hugs to you, friend,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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7 posted 2003-07-15 12:55 PM


Ethel~ your love and passion is something to celebrate, and your poetry resonates those feelings, like a song, so clear and true.

Makes me happy just to read you!  

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8 posted 2003-07-15 02:38 AM


dang, don't you ever write about anything sad and depressing?

this is just gorgeous! and it gives me hope that maybe one day...

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9 posted 2003-07-15 07:38 AM


Ethel~ Definately a
This has to be one of my favorites that you've shared with us. Thanks...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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10 posted 2003-07-15 09:34 AM


Beautiful!
Eric

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11 posted 2003-07-15 10:00 AM


Ed  
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Linda  
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Gemma  
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I thank ya'll and appreciate ya'll so very much.  
Heart hugs to you all  
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-07-15 10:02 AM


Janet Marie  
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Sue    
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Vicky  
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I wish I could really tell ya'll how much I thank and appreciate each of you. You are all so sweet.  
Heart hugs to all of you  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-15-2003 10:02 AM).]

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13 posted 2003-07-15 10:04 AM


Lori  
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Dixie  
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Paul    
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Eric    
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Ya'll are all so sweet with your words of encouragement. I thank each of you and appreciate ya'll, too.
Heart hugs to each of you  
Ethel

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14 posted 2003-07-15 10:21 AM



Bernie


A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

garysgirl
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15 posted 2003-07-15 11:08 AM


Thanks for the smile, Bernie.....
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16 posted 2003-07-15 06:17 PM


loved this
garysgirl
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17 posted 2003-07-15 10:31 PM


Thank you, Vandan. I'm glad that you liked it.
Hugs  
Ethel

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18 posted 2003-07-17 04:40 PM


New layers of love...James
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19 posted 2003-07-17 05:09 PM


Ohmy! OH MY!! I don't know how I missed this one..
But I love it!!..and a fantastic picture too!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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20 posted 2003-07-17 09:17 PM


garysgirl - a most lovely graphic, and poem. You got it bad girl, congratulations....

BC

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21 posted 2003-07-17 09:36 PM



...and it READS...

               absolutely marvelous!

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