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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-07-14 08:43 AM


Water white lily, brilliant
Love looked within my soul
Tasted my heart
Words of June
Wonderment brave
Far Sweeter then first awakening
Fountain cool as dew in twilight
All cravings released in dreams
Like a spirit with tremulous wings
Holding gracious between my fingers
Of a great city
I shall not breathe until I find him
Purchase me, with an all infernal glove
Gather with me…
What we may accomplish
together
for from that simple complexity
we shall be

© Copyright 2003 Lee J. - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-07-14 08:47 AM


LeeJ
A lovely write this morning and I enjoyed the read.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-14 01:01 PM


You are such a lovely descriptive writer, Lee!

Warm hugs to you!
Linda

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-07-14 03:58 PM


Silky...I think you love will like this...James
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-07-14 04:32 PM


Lee - you write so beautifully and in depth - it amazes me


I shall not breathe until I find him

xxoo

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