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Sun of faith
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 101

0 posted 2003-07-14 01:02 AM

Now free the pain from your body,
It is useless resting deep within yourself,
Set fire to your soul and see the embodied weakness escape your inner being.

Enhale with open lungs the loving air in which has past but is still there,
It shall enrich your encased freedom,
As it deserves to be freed again.

Be touched by these invisable hands,
Allow them to hold you, to save you,
Dont be afraid to fall anymore,
It shall catch you and cradle you away into eternal happiness.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-14 01:53 AM

"Enhale with open lungs the loving air in which has past but is still there,
It shall enrich your encased freedom,
As it deserves to be freed again."

Wonderful, wonderful! I love this..these lines, especially.

Thank you so much for sharing this

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-07-14 04:04 AM

very inspiring write!

VOE
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

3 posted 2003-07-14 04:20 AM

Love can be the ultimate healer of body, mind, and soul...just as you described. Very insightful write, and a wonderful inspiration.

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-07-14 05:25 AM

Nice expression...James

Bec
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since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

5 posted 2003-07-14 08:56 AM

This was great. I enjoyed reading it. The words were so empowering, I felt free reading it!

Bec

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2003-07-14 08:58 AM

Sun,
Well done, enjoyed the read.

collarbone_girl
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since 2003-07-14

Posts 45
Wonderland

7 posted 2003-07-14 09:14 AM

"Be touched by these invisable hands,
Allow them to hold you, to save you,"

yeah, you got it! this was smooth, it flowed so well. loved the alignment, and the words... they seem so little but mean so much.

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