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Open Poetry #27

Let's Talk (Senryu)

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

0 posted 2003-07-13 11:20 PM

Look at me and talk
Don't be a coward
If you are leaving...say so.

Local Rebel
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

1 posted 2003-07-14 12:37 PM

there are
no four words
a man dreads more
than
we have to talk
that you said it
in two
made a great
senryu

but a sad subject
peace to you
Tima

Don't tell me to get a life -- I have one on backorder.

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

2 posted 2003-07-14 12:48 PM

Thanks Reb!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-07-14 01:32 AM

oh girl, this one hurts

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-07-14 03:56 PM

Perhaps the coward will not be able to say he is leaving...perhaps he wants to desperately hold on...even though he knows its wrong...if the relationship has come to this surely both have some knowledge of the failures...James

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2003-07-14 04:12 PM

OUCH!!!
Good write!
~Heart Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-14 04:23 PM

Tima - yep that about says it all for sure
nice job
xxoo

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