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Tim
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0 posted 2003-07-13 10:32 PM



Here alone I sit in ponder,
As to the heaven’s I am drawn,
For tonight the moon is shining full,
Casting shadows on the lawn,
Speaking not in tongues of man,
Sings Luna from on high,
Calling out to me below
To join her in night’s sky.
On feathered wings of angel’s grace,
I soar to heaven’s floor,
Beyond the realm of earthen bind,
I soar to evermore.
Beyond the farthest galaxy,
Where time has lost its way,
Tomorrows they will never come,
Where there is no yesterday.
As shadows dance upon the lawn,
I cede to Luna’s pull,
Drawing me to heaven’s high,
Tonight the moon shines full.


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Suetang
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1 posted 2003-07-13 11:25 PM


Hello Tim

I am so surprised that there are no comments on this wonderful piece of writing.  Your words drew me in and captured me from start to finish.....absolutely breathtaking!!

"To love, is to receive
a glimpse into heaven"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Kahlil
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2 posted 2003-07-14 12:46 PM


This is a beautiful description of what is happening right before us if we'll only take the time to look.  I feel the pull, too, and I love your poem.  keeping it.....
timothysangel1973
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3 posted 2003-07-14 12:51 PM


Very beautiful Tim!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 2003-07-14 12:59 PM


Nice writing...James
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
5 posted 2003-07-14 02:28 AM


This is lovely!
Enjoyed


passing shadows
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6 posted 2003-07-14 04:01 AM


I love poems about shadows...nice one!
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