Morning In Early Fall (Tanka Form)

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Open Poetry #27

Morning In Early Fall (Tanka Form)

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2003-07-13 10:06 PM

Silver gray, soft roof
A shroud that clings, wets the ground
Strings diamonds on silk.
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Goldenrod webbed to asters,
The midnight work of spiders.
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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-13 10:11 PM

"The midnight work of spiders."

Oooh! This is worded beautifully.
Love it!

ice
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since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

2 posted 2003-07-15 08:58 PM

Thank you Kaoru..
Glad you liked it..:-) .....ice

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