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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-07-13 08:44 PM



Traveled Time

some people would like
to travel into the past
and maybe change some things
that didn't go as planned
but if that were possible
what if after the change
you went through the same hell as before
to get to where you are now

its hard to go through it once
but twice would be unimaginable
leave the past behind
look back at it when you need to
the future has to be better than it

"Who am I? Why am i here?" Admiral James Stockdale

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1 posted 2003-07-13 09:13 PM


Ahh, I relate to your thoughts here..
Great write

Tim
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2 posted 2003-07-13 10:56 PM


I have enough trouble with the present, I agree, leave the past behind. enjoyed.
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