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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-13 07:33 PM

Soft hush rock of car
you're still in driving seat
and I
still driven through this madness everyday

She steers our way
and I am oblivious
to her chatter
full moon horizon
scatters memories thru windscreen
of garden star gazing with you

It wasn't the romance
but the reality
of where we were placed in universe
and what we had

Our summer crashed to early death
Our, is now me
and i don't know where you are

Whilst I am core strewn
in wreckage
no fleshy outer appeal
dull tone of fake smile remains

dying inside.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-13 08:12 PM

Gem, I started to reply, but I was interupted. Chilling, this one gets the shiver award for sure

~The shivering peanut~

Don't it allways seem to go,
that you don't know what you've got till' it's gone
-counting crows

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-13 09:18 PM

Gemma, this really hurts me.
I really, really hate that you're feeling
this way, my friend. I can only imagine how
I would feel if this happened to me and
Gary. At least you ae able to write about it.
Does it help any? I sure do hope so.

Heart hugs to you, my friend

Ethel Mae

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-07-13 09:23 PM

Oh, this poem aches!
Your writing touches me deeply.
Beautifully written.

Etain
Member

since 2003-02-22

Posts 92
The moon...

4 posted 2003-07-13 09:23 PM

This is beautiful.
Enjoyed, warm greetings.
Etain.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

5 posted 2003-07-13 10:17 PM

Nicely written Gemma.

A very good read

Ed

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-13 10:56 PM

gem - you couldnt have penned it better

you're still in driving seat
and I
still driven through this madness everyday

I can so relate to that never-ending swirl of madness . . .
xxoo

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

7 posted 2003-07-13 11:21 PM

Powerful and stirring.
Eric

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-07-13 11:21 PM

that feeling of being suspended without a
landing place like dangling off a cloud

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

9 posted 2003-07-14 04:11 AM

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