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Edible Bubbles
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Edible Bubbles |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such joy, a childhood toy Cherry cheer, float root beer Light, to hover breezes coy Blown of lips, pursed tart sips Lemon drops, green lollipops Rainbow glee, touched smiling finger tips Such fun, adventured every one Berry blue, aided pink confetti brew Float, to lands remote and summer sun Then chase, burst of grin and covered face Grape aide, stained a purple shade Such joy, to find a bubble’s grace Copyright Kkh 7/13/03 |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Another trip to "Wippi Dip"?? You made me have a craving for something.. Never will forget an A and W RootBeer float... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
 SUGAR RUSH lol sorry this was cute...and yummy!If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
I like this, Kathleen. It did make me want some bubble gum or some Grape Aide or a rootbeer float...LOL. A very good poem.  Hugs  Ethel [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-13-2003 09:11 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love this! I'm a rootbeer addict  Great write  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Ah, the simple things in life! Thanks for this! Cor |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Such fun, adventured every one Berry blue, aided pink confetti brew Float, to lands remote and summer sun just had my favorite at the boardwalk before, pink cotton candy, what a rush  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Loving this, Kathleen...thanks for the smile tonight. Hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wait! Are you saying there was at some time such a thing? Edible Bubbles? I never got to try them! I feel so....left out... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
TD, your poem is bubbalicious delicious and a  !!!  Huggums, EA |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
I absolutely loved the rhyme scheme of this. Nice flow. An excellent tribute to all things simple and childlike. Thanks for the read. Kay Just wanna be funny,looks like the joke's on me. |
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