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Aenimal
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0 posted 2003-07-13 05:06 PM


Strip the skin
tiny red ribbons
fall to the floor
Sewn back together
an effigy
I burn everyday

*Muse is acting up so I thought i'd RP..just felt this today*

[This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-13-2003 05:07 PM).]

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Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-13 05:15 PM


Wow, this is so lovely. Thank you for sharing it.
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2 posted 2003-07-13 05:31 PM


Ehh... RP? your muse had gone dark, I see.
~The shivering peanut~


Don't it allways seem to go,
that you don't know what you've got till' it's gone
-counting crows


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Local Rebel
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3 posted 2003-07-13 05:33 PM


massively phat
Aenimal
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4 posted 2003-07-13 06:02 PM


Thanks Kaoru

Repost RP Liz..gone dark? I never left?

Yo Rebel word up G tanks for da props Boi

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-07-13 07:07 PM


. . . took the words right out of my mouth there Raph . . . the dark comment
for some odd reason this reminded me of, "Silence of the Lambs"

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Ceinwyn
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6 posted 2003-07-13 08:30 PM


*sits in silence*

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Aenimal
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7 posted 2003-07-14 11:45 AM


Thanks Sue, the stripping skin perhaps

Thanks Kris


gemjop
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8 posted 2003-07-14 01:03 PM


very glad indeed that you reposted this. I remember it well, though probably never replied the first time round.    standoffish  $%*!$ as ever.
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9 posted 2003-07-14 01:06 PM


:good stuff:

lol@rebel

gemjop
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10 posted 2003-07-14 02:03 PM


i just checked, and no i didnt reply. Oggod Sodov wouldn't either, if he knew what was good for him. yer nowt but trouble.
Honeybee
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11 posted 2003-07-14 09:23 PM


Wow, now this is powerful even with few words - that's the mark of a true (and talented) poet!  And the title? - perfect!

Thanks for re-posting this, I missed it the first time.

Melissa

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Aenimal
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12 posted 2003-07-14 09:26 PM


Thanks Gem both times and yeah you are standoffish ya &$^#%$ lol

thanks Dixie

Melissa thanks knew you'd like this one too we do it to ourselves all the time

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