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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-07-13 02:05 PM



Is it wrong for me
to wear your heart
upon my sleeve?
Or must you wear it alone?

Is it wrong to say I love you
even if you may not feel the same?
Does that somehow
cause you some deep unspoken pain?

Does love make you melt
any slower or faster
in the pouring rain?
Is it a case of no pain, no regrets?

I wonder.

And if you wonder too,
is Life just about guessing
you wondering about me,
me wondering about you?

Is this silence all there is?

Are we just silent thoughts
hovering in empty poetic cyberspace
in the darkness of night, unable or unwilling
to step into the light of each other?

I wonder.

© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Kacy Stafford - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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1 posted 2003-07-13 02:09 PM


Well written! Questioning, it leaves so much for us to answer to ourselves
Jennis#1
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2 posted 2003-07-13 02:15 PM


Great poem. Please visit my poems called austisms poems.

thanks


Jenn

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3 posted 2003-07-13 02:18 PM


Are we just silent thoughts
hovering in empty poetic cyberspace
in the darkness of night, unable or unwilling
to step into the light of each other?



Kacy, maybe one needs to make the first move? I wonder??  
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-07-13 02:27 PM


Kaori, yes...always more Q's than A's for me.

Jen, I did read them. Thanks for stopping by here.

Ethel, no way! it's suppose to happen by a magical POOF, isn't it?

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (07-13-2003 03:59 PM).]

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-07-13 03:58 PM


Kacy . . . well said indeed
I am sure many of us relate to this LOL
xxoo

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6 posted 2003-07-13 10:29 PM


i wonder,
yep, two titles we shared today.
tho you spoke of cyberlove
and i of the real thing.
btw, if you never meet in the flesh, youll never know

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7 posted 2003-07-13 10:31 PM


And if you wonder too,
is Life just about guessing
you wondering about me,
me wondering about you?


WONDERFUL WRITE



[This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (07-13-2003 10:32 PM).]

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