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Kaoru
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0 posted 2003-07-13 01:43 PM


Do I?
  (do I)
Do I intimidate
you?

We slept right through
that thunderstorm.

Alarm clock blinking,
four after midnight.

Angels illuminate the cracks
in the wall.
I dreamt up wings and my dreams..
they flew away.

Do I?
  (do I)
Do I intimidate you?

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1 posted 2003-07-13 01:45 PM


Hehe, no.
But thunderstorms do sometimes.

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2 posted 2003-07-13 01:56 PM


I never go to bed that early, but I don't think so :-)

I like your style.  I must read more...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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3 posted 2003-07-13 03:06 PM


The same as Midnitesun...you don't (LOL), but
the thunderstorms do a little bit.

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4 posted 2003-07-13 03:08 PM


this is great style that I see in this one. Thanks for posting this.

Don't it allways seem to go,
that you don't know what you've got till' it's gone
-counting crows

Aenimal
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5 posted 2003-07-13 03:43 PM


Liked it all but this just stood out for me

Angels illuminate the cracks
in the wall.
I dreamt up wings and my dreams..
they flew away

great write

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