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Bruised
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since 2003-07-12
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0 posted 2003-07-13 01:08 AM



"We Are One"

Suddenly I begin to breathe deep
my nerves are going insane
I start to tremble in amazement ...

I finally look into those eyes
my heart just about stops
I think I'm going into shock ...

That smile is so innocent
there's such a enticing look to you
but I know I like it ...

As masculine and feminine meet
the air soon grows thick from heat
yet it's not the weather ...

The gentle touch of your hand
makes me quiver
Emotions swell up inside ...

There's a pain in my stomach
it's good though
I want it to stay ...

Your harsh embrace is so sensational
to feel your body with mine
Tis a dream come true ...

Heat comes over me
it's so hard to breathe
Yet I still like it this way ...

As you softly caress my face
goosebumps arise
Here is the moment when we exist ...

Gazing into your eyes
it's going to happen
I wait in worry, anxiety, and impatience ...

You start to approach
I'm getting ready
I hope I don't mess up ...

And then it happens
your lips binded with mine
long and slow ...

My worry starts to fade
I'm feeling ok
I start to participate ...

We drift through time
it seems like an hour
but was only a minute ...

I pull you in farther
you're holding me closer
We never want it to be over ...

I'm out of oxygen
we'll stop for a second
amazingly I hear "I love you" uttered ...

Still holding on
I look into your eyes
I'll reply "I love you too" and I'll see you smile ...

Time freezes
It's not the end
Tis only the beginning ...

... We are one.

~ Tenshi

"If it's too loud, you're too old!" - A Rock Artist

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1 posted 2003-07-13 01:05 PM


I don't know any man who wouldn't want to read these words if they were written to him by his object of affection...
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2 posted 2003-07-13 01:38 PM


Hmm, almost too much for me, sitting here alone, staring at a blue screen.
Very nicely done.
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3 posted 2003-07-13 01:49 PM


Enjoyed this very much,
thank you!

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4 posted 2003-07-13 02:14 PM


Welcome!

Nice romantic write here, I look forward to reading more ... soon.

And by all means, get comfy, take a look around, respond and post, for you are amongst the land of word people now ... enjoy!


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